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Re: A NEW TERROR( STAR WARS CROSSOVER)

Post by Praeothmin » Tue Feb 14, 2012 2:43 pm

Admiral Breetai wrote:Preao if you ever write up Im'pec vs James..they need join Rainbird and have a three on three rumble with Jackson and Sar'Ur'ion and Aphonous
Only problem is, Rainbird is a good guy, and so is James, Aphorious as well, and Jackson also.
So it would be four against two, James, Rainbird, Aphorious and Jackson against Im'Pec and Sar'Ur'ion...
And while they are both powerful fighters, I've made James very, very powerful, Rainbird can take care of Im'Pec by himself, which leaves Jackson and Aphorious to take them out by surprise...

Unless... Hhhmmmm...

I'll write it, but it won't be now, as I'm on a roll with my fanfic, and I want this to be just right...
I don't think I have the complete feel for Jackson just yet, I'll have to re-read everything about him, 'cause I want to render your characters as they deserve...

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Post by Admiral Breetai » Tue Feb 14, 2012 3:44 pm

Rainbird can manage to die with Im'pec... which leaves James with limited back up against..evil monster man

and we'll see how either of them do against Luke and Vader because yes I do plan on a little tussle between the four

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Re: A NEW TERROR( STAR WARS CROSSOVER)

Post by sonofccn » Tue Feb 14, 2012 7:50 pm

Okay this is for Praeothmin and because it has been far too long since Jackson killed anything directly. Another bit of fluff filler while I work on Valor Squad's saga thing. Also ten quatloos for which sci-fi ship I'm, poorly, aping the Scarlet off of.

Imperial Classics: The Early Years-

"...to any Imperial forces in range, we need immedite evacuation. We are being overwhelmed, enemy forces on all sides. We need immedite evac!" Colonel Raki of the Gocdlrow militia force unknowingly radioing ISS Wraith then in upper orbit following completion of space superority mission.

Last time on Imperial Classics {The Early Years} War weary! Under constant heavy assault the defenders of the mech-world Gocdlrow wearily fight to save the industrial planet from the insidious and treacherous alien menace. But hope and life are nearly extinguished in the clanking globe of tin, even the stoutest warriors of the Imperial Creed doubting if they will prevail!


To the beleaguered remainders of the Gocdlrow militia entrenched among the once glittering glass and durasteel towers and the deep ravines of humidity condensers and heat exchangers it was a unique and singular experience to look up at the murky, polluted sky and see the troop barge Scarlet descending. Even of the faithful Wraith legion bunkered in support of their brother Imperials it was a rare sight to see the old Prairie class still operational. Replaced by the legion of repulsar equipped freighters and starhoppers and the numerous local duplicates which sprung up from the leading Industrial Families.

Design unmistakable through for those who had been born on Soth Thejas or her colonies, for over nine decades the familiar shape had ferried both bulk cargo as well as loyal Assault forces to and from a planet’s surface. A prow sweeping up from its bulky body, creating the illusion and illustration of wild and free beasts from days before, while the first of its fuel hungry rocket pods emerged from its midsection complimenting the four smaller engines which encircled the hindquarters and whose mingling exhaust creating a comet like tail in the ship’s wake. That now shown above the defenders against the troubled sky as the Scarlet, name emblazoned brightly on its side next to a ravaging woman in red, majestically maneuvered through the disparate pockets and swirling eddies created by the oven like belches of steam and refuge from the towering smoke stacks that perpetually rose between the skyscrapers seeking ever cleaner atmosphere to deposit their filth in.

Grime which seemed to fail to blemish the barge’s hull as well did the stray laser cannon fire which lit up around the ship from the surface, captured emplacements of which the pilot of the Scarlet had targeted. Missiles pods, an added customization at the operator’s expense, explosively spawning the deadly silver rockets which careened into the guns scattering them. Bits tumbling through the dense air before resistance and gravity brought it back down as steel rain over the marauder’s heads, cheers rising up from the defenders watching some of their numbers fall brained or their side split open from a metal sliver the size of a handwidth. Even more when the circling barge switched from piercing explosive to missile-bombs laden with burning gel, capsules bursting over the enemy’s head saturating them with vicious fluid which then ignited. The perpetual gloom of the cityscape, normally broken only by the now smashed and shattered lights of the towers, dying back from the thousands of living candles which screeched and convulsed rolling over the ground or falling off of ledges into ravines and pits.

So did Scarlet announce her arrival, slowing at last over a clear space which once had been an aircar parking lot shunting off two of its engines and traversing the remaining four to point downward cushioning its slow descent to the cracked and broken surface. Airspeeders smashed by artillery or strafing enemy strikecraft skipping across the surface from the roaring engines, their hides taking a glowing sheen before they drooped and collapsed into molten goo. Bubbling slag which seeped and cooled when at last the engine flare died away and the barge struck its feet down cracking a surface which had been heat scoured smooth, no sooner settling than the aft ramp descended onto the still brittle surface an officer walking down flanked on either side by stormtroopers. The world of either’s birth made perfectly clear on their shoulder patch where breaking from their monochromatic white polish the armor had been done in the red, blue and white of Soth Thejas.

Behind them rolled two “Sloop” tanks redone in an anti-air capability and an troop carrier which drove past the officer and his guards pushing down the entry ramp leading to the next platform and the still raging battle. Merely the tiniest part of one level of the ongoing destruction which had gripped this precinct, a mess of scorched corpses broken glass, exploding shells, toppled walls and blaster fire of which the human occupants greedily looked up from their surroundings to gaze at the silt filled sky and the heavenly lights of the descending shuttles that came down after the Scarlet. Settling down far more gently and closer to the besieged infantrymen, already crowding forth towards the Scarlet, and bringing with it the promise of relief, of safety.

Chief concern, and desire, of Colonel Raki of the mech-world’s militia as he stormed up the ramp meeting the Naval Captain half way up, cleaning one smudged and dirt riddled hand as best he could before extended it into the officer’s iron grip which closed around it like a vise. Then shook it like a Wookiee would if suitably enraged, making Raki’s head shake harder than it had the time the artillery shell had nearly made his position.

“Can’t imagine what it is to see you Captain.” Raki said over the whistle of falling bombs and counter-battery fire doing his best to keep his voice steady even as his body rattled.” We just about thought we’d been forgotten up there, but really this is not a safe place to be, as I’m sure you can well imagine.”

“Nonsense son! We ain’t about to desert our own are we?” The officer roared with laughter, closer to the sound of a Locust fighter before it made a strafe, releasing his grip on the Colonel to slap him on the shoulder in comradely and nearly threw the man off of his feet and down several hundred meters.” But I reckon you are right, this is a mite bad place to discuss matters. Ya’ll command bunker should suffice however.”

Not waiting for an answer the blustering man pushed past Raki and through the Colonel’s own guards, like a stone tossed through water, down to the next platform. His stormtroopers following a step behind but coiled to step up should the broiling conflict consuming the man made plateau reach further pitch. Surprised and feeling like an idiot Raki was forced to come after him as well, shouting to be heard over the din calling to him. Something the officer didn’t seem to have issue with, his voice cutting across the rabble with flawless, if deafening, clarity.

“Its just Captain what little I feel the need to discuss can be done once we’re airborne and my men and I are leaving this filthy little squatterville.” Raki explained huffing forced to take two steps for every one of the Captain’s to reach and match him.” If you want my official recommendation I can give it to you here, burn this sector out from orbit and be done with it.”

“We all are not going.” The Officer said gesturing with one swipe of a hefty palm the myriad hellhole around him.” My little old orders were the same I reckon yours were, to secure the site from the infernal little old critters and help evacuate Imperial personal to safety. Y’all shall be doing this along side my boys.”

Looking with a clearer eye around him Raki now saw through the returning gloom of twilight of the world the barges and shuttles which had appeared as Emperor sent were in fact disgorging fresh legions of stormtroopers and equipment into the arena. Saw across the way on another tower’s platform, with growing pits of fear, them force his men to undertake combined assaults on the connecting bridgeheads separating the divergent plateaus. Heard his man on the auxiliary unit calling for him, suddenly beset by crazed commands no doubt being delivered by uncouth savages devolved from basic stock by over a thousand years.

“Its impossible Captain, simply that. The remaining Civvies, if they’re still alive, are trapped in the lower levels. Between them and us are the full armies of three heavy cruisers, say a six or eight hundred thousand for nice round numbers, and they very much are not going to just let us walk down to pick up the few mongrel strays who’ve managed to stay alive this far.” Raki tried hoping he sound reasonable, hoping to poke through the giant’s feth induced honor.

“I reckon these critters will put up a dern full fight.” The Captain admitted giving the Colonel hope before he saw the twinkle in the man’s eye.” That only means we all have to fight more so.”

Raki moved to correct the hard headed fool, challenge his authority to the Emperor granted one of the Colonel’s to safeguard his men, but sweeping out in front of the muscled officer he was interrupted with a shrieking siren of a dragon fly bombers which braved through the anti-air laser cannons and the Sloop tank’s rockets passing overhead dropping blister munitions as well as a pair of egg canisters each. Each oblong crate flattening whatever lay beneath them, deliberate stress points breaking open to the cushioned interior allowing the tightly curled inhabitance to be flung forth. Spindly legs unfurling, translucent, oily wings sliding free to beat a devil’s hum, leathery membranes peeling back revealing telescopic lenses which swiveled and extended from a hellish merger of flesh and inorganic. The horror continuing to the scythe like arms which uncrossed from their slender, tubular bodies, barbed teeth whirring to life on their edge, along with a pair of technoganic blasters.

“Emperor have mercy.” Raki whispered stepping past the Officer staring at the specimen landing not more than two or three meters away.

Its eyes snapping on his movement, the sound of his heart racing beneath his armor plate, exciting it spurring away the last traces of lethargy induced from its transport. Legs pushing off against the rubble strewn ground as it took off, wings appearing once again, a blaster arm twitching as it shot one of the Colonial Stormtroopers who had stepped between it and the Officer shoving him back. The body losing traction with its chest exploding, armor punched inward as a steaming mess, but did not fall taken under the support of the Captain. Had it fallen the Bug might have been distracted, some scant moments as sensors and instinct competed, and Raki would have had time to run. Instead he’d heard the chink of durasteel saw-teeth cutting through bone, felt the burst of heat of blaster fire and saw his bodyguards fall in disarray around him never to raise again. And he knew. Turning around with the grave reluctance of the condemned he turned to face the hornet headed mutant, raising his head up to its dripping mandibles and servo humming revolving eyes. Going for his pistol he watched it’s mouth split open, heard its screech and rushed to meet to meet its coming attack when a scarlet pulse drilled through the back of its head rupturing it and showering the Colonel with a sheet of rancid gel and sparking circuits.

Raki, blinking away the stinging sludge, looking past the Bug corpse which slumped to the ground back to the Officer standing with a rifle beside the fallen stormtrooper with his back to the other.

“Y’all’s mine.” He growled pleasingly watching the Xeno corpse fall before pivoting to face a scuttling shadow.

Sparks shooting off against his face, vanishing in his prickling beard, catching a saw-scythe with the side of his rifle, letting it slide across the barrel as he drove the gun’s stock down upon one of the creature’s toothpick legs with a crunch. The beast sagging with the snapping limb, copious goo gushing from the severed limb, relaxing its force against the rifle which slide around along with the moving Officer to the top of the arm pushing it down against the alien abdomen. The revving teeth gleefully carving through the exoskeleton spraying gray blood out in all directions severing through organ tissue and nerve bundles, its body locking in paralyses while the Captain drew up behind it ramming the cracked and stained end of his rifle through the Xeno’s skull vomiting brain and carapace fragments out onto the ground in a stinking soupy mixture.

Drawing the weapon out, and kicking the body over with the toe of his boot, he scanned across the battlefield along with his remaining bodyguard for further enemy forces only to see the commando strike rebuked completely. Rockets and laser fire downing any remaining bombers which loitered to repeat the assault while freshly deployed heavy cannons slaughtered the embryonic attack the aliens had attempted to exploit the distraction. Seeing this, all things within reach under control, he nodded to his trooper and gestured to the one who’d saved his life.

“Y’all make sure Clanton’s body is put on Scarlet.” He ordered to the saluting stormtrooper who dutifully fell to the task leaving the Captain free to find Raki.

He himself haven’t budged from where the Bug’s head had been blown off, pistol hanging from his weathered grip at his side, watching the giant man step towards him. Gobbling up the ground between like one of the winged Xeno’s might, the heel of his boot deliberately cracking the back of the headless sithspawn sending slime squirting out as he stepped in front of the Colonel.

“ I recall we all were convoluting over our orders.” Jackson summarized in his booming voice as he lifted a hand up to the other and began to crack his knuckles.” To my recollection they are to destroy the enemy while searching for any old soul lost in this here rubble. Yours?”

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Praeothmin wrote:I don't think I have the complete feel for Jackson just yet
Well I like to think he's Robert E. Lee merged with Teddy Roosevelt via some transporter accident. But admittedly I'm insane so go with how you see him. I know it will be great.
Praeothmin wrote:'cause I want to render your characters as they deserve...
I can't wait to see how a compently writen Jackson goes. ;)
Admiral Breetai wrote:so then I horribly misread your work I apologize for a second I thought the good Commodore made allies with the Slenderman
Well I wouldn't say horribly misread, it was written as him meeting someone, so any misconstruing would fall upon my shoulders and I do like your idea. I mean I guess I'm trying to say I wouldn't want to be the guy that kills Jack, or be in the nearby vicinity.

Through to clear any further error on my writing skills Jack the spy guy is not Commodore Jack Krevin, they just have the same first name because I'm a hack writer. :)

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Re: A NEW TERROR( STAR WARS CROSSOVER)

Post by Praeothmin » Wed Feb 15, 2012 5:10 pm

Nice update, helped me understand Jackson a "mite better'n the way I unnerstood him, I'd say"...

I love background updates, but I don't think I'd be good at it, so I'll leave it to the pros like you and Breetai...

And I've mapped out the fight a bit while training yesterday, and I do think "y'all gonna love the way it turns out"...

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Post by Admiral Breetai » Thu Feb 16, 2012 12:22 am

this has been quite a spectacular update the background fluff is spectacular. Jackson is a boss but I see less of Robert E Lee and see more of Jackson in him

you seem to have planned this out in advance no?

I think both our fics are now a year old yes?

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Post by Praeothmin » Thu Feb 16, 2012 1:29 am

Didn't both your Fics start in December 2010?

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Post by Admiral Breetai » Thu Feb 16, 2012 9:12 pm

Praeothmin wrote:Didn't both your Fics start in December 2010?
eleven I believe

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Post by Praeothmin » Fri Feb 17, 2012 2:27 pm

Close:
Yours started December 27th, 2010, and sonofccn's on January 20th, 2011...

You both inspired me, so I started mine on March 18th 2011...

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Post by Admiral Breetai » Fri Feb 17, 2012 8:36 pm

Happy anniversary sonofccn

you too preao when the time comes

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Post by sonofccn » Mon Feb 20, 2012 8:09 pm

Okay the big Viper fight scene. Hope you like it.

“Bauble bauble burning bright, spinning through the dead of night. What sweep and majesty her grace, drawing through hunger this immutable case. For those whom laid low the great walls of M’th now come to fight, scurrying behind the walls of sight. Dear friends and lovers too, turned away and made askew. The Cultium hunger knows no bounds, fear now before we’re scattered across the grounds.” Emergency Services call placed from one Edward Sutter’s residence, responding officers found the home abandoned with no trace of Edward or his family.

New Hope, Point-Of-Reckoning-

I.Bad moon Rising Creedence ClearWater Revival

Diving behind what had been cut to resemble a black pillar of rock Jek found himself thinking to the lazy days he’d spent watching the holovids, of long sticky summer days spent in the cool shade of a holo-palace, of the dashing heroes who routinely saved the day from the dastardly anti-imperial fiends who tied damsels to the tracks of mag-trans. Always confident, always cool under the worst pressure, wading into the lines of enemy fire.

Of course no matter their numbers the heroes’ foes never could seem to hit them which encouraged bold gestures the way the splintering of molded plastic and sparking of looped conductive wire pulled to make Kid curl up into a tight little ball. He didn’t however disregarding sense, reason and likely any hope of ever being eligible for a life insurance policy to lean out around the edge of the rock pillar see a scuttling blur of movement fir a spasm of bolts out into the arena and slink back behind his dwindling cover ahead of a fresh burst that dented the floor. Small caliber some part of his mind recorded while the rest went through its epileptic fights of terror, a rapid fire handgun like most of the den of Vipers were packing instead of their heavier hardware. The only reason his cover of plastic and mesh hadn’t been already punched through and his body riddled.

Small arms in these sense being measured in hot lead ninety-nine millimeters in length that would punch holes rivaling his fist in width through his body, a very small comfort all things considered he found repeating his exposure for unfathomable reasons. Nicking one of the Snakes as it wiggled closer from one crevice to behind a bank of electronic equipment, the machinery itself receiving far worse of Jek’s wrath than the Xeno whose arm twisted around the metallic corner spraying hell fire from its machine pistol as a return gift. Cracking out more the plastic rock Kid huddled behind waiting, waiting to hear the soft click of a firing pin striking air and while he gibbering mind was still processing its implications rolled back out peppering the thing’s withdrawing arm. Bone and tissue popping in hissing conflagrations, the gun falling away through the dissolving mists which chewed at the bottom edge of its palm, over the beast’s throaty roar and the creaking of metal as the stack of monitors and data processors buckled and toppled. Revealing the Viper, good fist clenched into a bone mallet sinking through the back of it all, pushing off over it drawing its wounded hand to its chest and craning its screaming head towards Jek. Looking him in the eye, burning with intensity of dying stars, before a pulse shot neither of them saw until it was illuminating the side of the beast’s skull magma red and expelling its broiling brains out the other in an ever widening funnel.

Looking away from the body, which draped over the toppled machinery, to the blasted open doorway Kid saw Lucky edging prone around the jagged edge of the door. The sharpshooter nodding to the Corporal as he shifted targets, another shot another Viper tumbling, through the chaos. Across the breath of the breached door frame the machine-man also appeared, Specs sprinting with his back held low to the floor racing beneath the squad leader’s fire to find cover. Before the thought had even been processed Jek found himself pointed away from the smoky doorway spreading a line of blaster shots along the back of the room ahead of the cyborg as well, dividing and herding the alien masses away from him. The itch building again watching them converge and splinter lost in confusion, some remaining rigid where they were tightly gripping their pistols in both hands to steady their aim, others squirmed forward with more erratic shooting in contrast to the rest which sought what protection they could behind plasma scorched computer terminals and plastic molds.

Then Jek was behind his pillar again listening to the hail sound of bullets ripping through, curling low to the ground feeling pebbles of dust rain over him. Glad the torrent was only momentary, their guns’ endurance barely a moment or two, and he was free once more to scurry out from behind the moth eaten rock cropping, legs carrying him closer to the monsters for some reason, worrying only about diving behind a computer bank before they reloaded. That and the persistent itch that refused to abate, not precisely the enemy’s diverse and for the most part lethargic response he realized with continued thought. Not exactly, merely a deeper truth which budded and seeped through the layers of his conscious mind like the toxin from a Nerva dart as he hit the uneven and littered floor rolling hard with his shoulder into the sharp corner of the terminal.

A feeling of too much ease, since departing from the Army squad leaving them as a distraction, as bait a word which still twisted hot blades in his stomach, finding no enemies as they snuck through the corridors, an unguarded door just begging for a thermal charge and a room full of computer operators now. It couldn’t last, his life never been that good. Not since her, not since waking up bound for that miserable frozen wasteland. Something was going to happen, something bad.

Pushing up on his elbows, lifting a hand up to his throbbing side, it happened just on cue a flicker of movement of movement on the corner of his eye transforming into a green spear lunging through the bundles of cables snaking their way between the electronic machinery and roosting rock cropping. Claws, blunter and less pronounced than most he’d witnessed up close, slashing deep grooves through the soft metal of the terminal missing the Corporal’s diving head, body rolling onto his good shoulder than his bad back out towards his destroyed pillar as a second scaled hand clenching a wicked edged dagger plunged past splitting through the deck panel. Its owner not even bothering to lift it out, pressing down into it as it swung widely off of it lunging with stretching jaws after Kid who moved in the slowest motion in comparison. Pushing up onto his knees then flinging himself backwards freeing both legs which stretched out below those jaws, those terrible jaws. His mind lodging the insanity of the action through its overtaxed network for all the good it did, muscles locked in place holding them in place, and with the sight of those fangs slamming shut fractions of millimeters from his nose killed any hope of rational thought regardless. Only recognizing the end of his gun swooping up belatedly, as a series of after images concurrent with the frames of his gun and nearly all of his hands vanished inside the reopening maw. The insides illuminated with burning embers and plasma bursts tunneling up through the back of the thing’s head atomizing the rear of its skull.

Then his legs gave out and the weight fell over him, the world alternating dark and lit rolling out from , pulling out arms cut, burned and dripping with alien mucus but functional. Same as his carbine, he checked sliding behind the alien’s body wary of exposing even the tiniest portion of his body to the fiends, a cursory check revealing no damage to it at least exteriorly. The delicate internal mechanisms were beyond his sight much less skill or time to repair, the training to do so bypassed by his training sergeant who felt that considering the crop of soldiers in question it would be simpler to replace faulty weapons off of their dead comrades. If not “you son of banthas will figure it out well enough” as he phrased it. No such spontaneous epiphany had yet occurred, finishing his inspection over the black metallic surface, but it still seemed in all likelihood that his weapon would out live him.

On such cheerful thoughts, merely glad to have time without events spinning out into indistinct haze of actions, he looked up from his weapon to the man melded with technology. Recognizing despite himself the smile emblazoned in the twisted remnants of his visage, the slight hue of his eyes or the wrinkle in a patch of desiccated skin, as he in turn looked over the little stormtrooper.

“Keep playing with the natives Kid and we’ll never be done here.” He wheezed, voice box crackling with static wearing down like everything else in him, turning away to shoot between the shattered monitors of a station following the warning chirps of his scanner.

Jek not answering his jest, couldn’t find the strength to spare, but rearing up around the corpse blistering with stray weapons fire and adding his own destructive chorus to the cyborg’s melody. Behind Lucky threw his own lot in, advancing with a slow creeping pace standing straight and proud with his rifle tucked beneath his shoulder daring any of the foul aliens to strike him down. None of whom did, nearly all of those who resisted already slaughtered leaving only those who squirmed and sought shelter and by the passing of moments even they too fell away. Leaving smoldering terminals, sparking pillars melting into bubbling puddles and floor panels scorched black among the innumerable corpses, dozens at least through from the way some bodies splayed and burst made this difficult, adding to the charnel stench which hung over the command bridge like a dark plague.

But through it live would be saved; the bitter fruit now planted reaping a beautiful bounty. The Xeno forces without their head easier to chisel apart and route, the chain of fortifications and trenches dug along the earth breaking like fine crystalline. That had to be worth something Jek thought to himself, rising up, fighting a sudden twist in his stomach at a Viper with smoke curling from the crater burned into its scaly back and it’s still hooked pistol on its forearm sprawled in reach of the battle torn far wall. The feeling lasting only for a second before Kid stepped onto and over the creature, moving with Specs as they checked for survivors. To ensure their job was finished completely. Lucky taking it to himself to smash anything technological which had managed to survive the onslaught apparently unscathed, the butt of his rifle or a well placed burst of plasma fixing that adding to the polluted atmosphere.

Pausing from his work only at the sudden squawking coming from the machine-man’s wrist, he and the Corporal ceasing their activities in unison his electronic eyes seeking the complicated readout of his sensitive device.

“What is it?” The squad leader asked voice betraying nothing but the tightening of his fingers on his rifle did.

“Big reading…” Specs answered turning in a half circle after the doorway, the first loud snarl of gun fire which split it.” Very big…”

II. Swords into the wind-Manowar

Hailing to his namesake ’48 dropped beneath the swatch which cut for him, knee cracking against the panel beneath him leaving a cracked dent when he rolled away onto his back. Escaping a second, more hurried burst before its originator switched targets to a new motion, a new sound. The last thing the green skinned Viper did before a burst exploded into its shoulder, magma gushing out pooling over its beating chest, rocking it backwards towards something larger, something darker which the Snake twisted its body in front of shielding it. Protecting it from Specs’s fire, weaving between the Viper’s own scattered shots, as well as Jek who with a warrior cry ’19 would have smiled at found himself racing past the still lying Lucky after the Xeno beast. Moving fast, but not nearly as fast as the machine-man who with but a glance from his squad leader spurned ahead taking the lead to kick out the burning corpse of the alien from its wedge between the doorway.

Governed by the squeals and beeps of his scanner even more than his enhanced eyes so that his weapon fell on the dark shadow and not its remaining protector even before the smoldering remains had fully cleared. Three pulses leaping forth from him as the body struck the ground with a thud, another three as his heel dug into the hard throat of it turning it to mash. Six capsules of plasma which his glowing eyes recorded in vivid clarity the black skinned warrior evade as it approached. Its body twirling like a tendril of seaweed caught between currents, head dipping beneath one glowing globule while its body curved into a question mark or listed to the side letting the deadly bolts sail past. Their radiance falling harmlessly off of the thick onyx scales harder than the armored vest it wore and adding a wicked aura to the gleaming sword its rightening body reared up reared up past its scarred head.

But only for the barest fraction, never ceasing to all but the most sensitive of apparatuses of which Specs’s orbs belonged, descending down like a lightening at the machine-man’s neck and shoulder where it would drink deep in his life blood. Muscles honed in combat to rival of the quality of his optic sensors denying the blade its thirst, the very edge of the blade skimming over his backwards bending face slicing off a twisted lump of metal. The mildest grunt coming from the Xeno as its nostrils failed to be clogged with the heavy perfume of blood, eyes tracking both Jek emerging in the doorway as well as the man of metal as well as flesh scoot past.

Turning its body out of the way of the hail of lethal pulses Kid threw up it followed with its head Specs running past, the cyborg pulling his head back up missing the Viper’s claw-hand jumping to its sword arm yanking a heavy pistol off. Which followed in line with its snout, thumb-claw assuring by feel single shot was still in place before it fired and the machine-man’s midsection vomited the coppery substance. Tumbling to the ground the next, skidding past the remaining guard lingering back at its master’s orders, while the onyx beast swung with its tail at the scream of Jek’s silencing when its side hit him in the chest and catapulted him off of his feet. Shreds of armor flying off into the air, landing on the great serpent as it slithered forward into the room hooking its assault pistol back onto its resting place. The sword held up near its face ready for the hairless ape clad in broken white armor rising up off of the floor, Lucky quiet where Kid had thundered. Skin boiling with a caldron that had first been poured in the dead forest, lit out in the muddy trenches and now came pouring forth out of his pores like a dank fog.

Through its sweltering presence he felt his fingers tighten over the stock and grip of his rifle, holding it against his chest pointed away from the dark as night Viper which slinked in. Not pointing it, not yet letting his muscles build for that moment. Waiting for it, eyes locked into the soulless pools of his foe approaching without fear. He’d seen how fast it moved, seen Specs’s and Kid’s fall and knew he’d never have a second shot. Knew he didn’t need one, been the best marksmen of his troop during training. From nearly the first day he’d been selected aside from his peers given a scoped rifle, made to practice with it until he and it were nearly one. Sharpening a knack he first developed taking quarry down with his father, carrying a light blaster since he was ten, like obsidian glass. Where it was used, among other places, on some nigh worthless world with some Planetary Lord who refused to accept the “guidance” of the Empire, Lucky part of the team which had been dispatched to destroy the power generators holding up the protective screens over the capitol. Catching the notice of Gunny there, the Sergeant inquiring to the cause of a series of enemy soldiers fallen at their posts together. Their heads split open.

So he could hit the scaly devil before him now, his concern shaving down the fractions of a second that stood between them to the utmost bare. So he stood like a soldier, like a guardian, rock still and steady drawing the Viper in. Watching it seem to grow and rise above him, its head curving up above towards the ceiling, like the ghostly specter of death itself. Its body a shadow even in the like, blacken by the roll of ages, the only reflection that of its gleaming sword which rested unmoved from out in front held like Lucky’s rifle it was positioned not threateningly and like his weapon its appearance was a deceptive lie. A lie the stormtrooper ended with the herald of a solitary word of basic but hurled like a spear from his throat to the Lizard’s massive chest for it but to pierce and kill should venom and hate give words weight.

“Enough.” He cursed springing his rifle out, from its corner the heavy wrought blade of iron descended.

Intersecting the gun’s muzzle slicing it apart in a burst of light but not before a scarlet beam lanced out, Lucky’s face bathed in the hot scalding glow of the incinerating armor of the protective vest and his sinuses drank deeply the odor of burning flesh watching the fiery blossom puncture through the skin beneath. Then watched the shimmering light fade, the stinging soot clear and as the barrel of his rifle came to a rest on the floor gazed at the crimson wound no more than a millimeter or so punctured. Looking up to the Viper’s face to see its eyes before they were blotted out by its raising sword, saw amusement there saw the thrill one always felt holding life and death in one hand but also so saw something else in those horrible pools. Something that was far more sickening, far more repulsive. Respect, perhaps even pride which fed into Lucky fueling him by his rage in time for the killing stroke.

The blade came down, swerving his ruined rifle around sliding his hand across to its still glowing end he pushed it up towards the Viper. The two meeting between but for the barest moment, the metal turned from an Imperial forge parting for the alien weapon taking all but a breath for it to clear. Much can happen in the breadth of a heartbeat through, for ’48 it was enough for him to shove the rifle gripped by his right hand against it, pushing off of it.

Pushing himself clear, to the side of the Serpent hearing its hiss of surprise as the sword passed, the warping of metal as it passed through the deck plate like it was air. Didn’t realize the cost until, leaping onto the thing’s barreled chest, felt something wet and sticky strike his face. Something coppery. Its source beneath his left shoulder which abruptly ended, his hand still clutching its end of his rifle beneath in a growing glade of red, the same the Xeno’s sword tasted across its surface rising back up from the gouged floor. No time to mourn, no time to think.

Undoing his pistol from its holster the best shooter of Valor squad made off the three worst discharges of his career. One going off into the bulkhead beneath barely after it cleared its satchel, another sailed past the Viper’s lithe head scattering its destructive energy over the ceiling and the third at last struck the great foe but not in its cranium even then twisting away from a possible fourth shot but the craggy block of bone and muscle it called a shoulder which bent intercepting then continued as the energies wracked it slamming into Lucky knocking him off. Its tail snapping out of the peripheral as he took flight, not seeing it but feeling his leg shatter as the two collided. Then he was on his back, the world spinning and dark nebulas eating their way across his vision.

Through it he saw the Viper tower over him, its head down turned with its sword resting just beneath his chin ready to sever his head away. From its lipless mouth came growling words beyond Lucky’s limit of understanding, knowing only that their washing over him made him feel dirty. Filled with further rage causing him to spit up at the beast, incensed that his final moments would be listening to its Emperor forsaken black speech.

“Kill me you bantha fether!” He screamed not wishing his failure to be prolonged but to meet its inevitable end quickly and clean.

Its features rippling into a scowl the Viper looked like it was too deliver when its guard behind it shouted in its infernal tongue and a second shape appeared above ’48 leaping onto the back of the great serpent. Recognizing the pain thick cry in an instant, the form of Kid saddling the Xeno in another. From his place on the floor Lucky watched the young stormtrooper, screaming wild and crazy, pull his revolver free and shove it against the back of the Viper’s head. The squad leader hearing the heavy thud of the crude propellant ignited, of the slug belching forth from the chamber. He saw the red splatter back into Kid’s face as the bullet bite down, saw it before the sweeping claw-hand brushed across Jek’s cracked ribs adding their own ruby rivers knocking him from his perch. The Onyx lizard diving forward as its passenger fell, dipping nearly to Lucky’s body, but caught itself and reared back up. Sword hand held at the ready to strike at anything while one claw-finger assuaged its splintered but intact skull and the bleeding wound.

Undeterred it withdrew the digit away barking orders to its green skinned guard which had moved to finish off Kid now struggling to rise doing his best to hold his own bleeding at bay and reach for his fallen handgun. Hissing the guard tried to argue gesturing with its rifle towards the stormtrooper but at last relented retreating back towards the door as the black Viper turned its shoulder to Jek preparing to finish off Lucky through he hadn’t moved. Couldn’t despite wanting too, his body feeling too light, too weak but his insult had not been forgotten. Something which gave ’48 some form of odd closure as the Serpent grew in his vision once again to strike him only to be interrupted yet again. This time not with the cry of its guard, whose throat along with his head burst open in a flash of vapor, but by a human voice nearly as much as a growl as any Snake’s.

“It’s time you quite playing with these kids.” Aphorious snarled limping in leaving a thick trail to follow with his cigarra.” It’s time for the men to settle this, one against the other.”

And through his words meant nothing to the beast, as it own speech did to him, something bled through. Some flicker of understanding dawning in the old eyes of the Viper as it turned around raising its sword high only to halt as the Master Sergeant held up his hand.

“Not quite yet…this is between the two of us.” He said slowly, exhaling oily plumes of soot.”Corporal? Can you get to your feet?”

Jek nodded, gritting his teeth as he shambled up a hand pressed against his sopping side the entire time. The other shakily holding his revolver which he brought to bear against the Viper until a swift shake of the Sergeant’s head dispelled him of that notion. Aphorious, taking his cigarra from his lips, gesturing over his shoulder through the doorway to Huds who held draped over his shoulder the body of Specs then to Lucky’s body.

“Get’em up out of here Corporal. That’s an older. Get them to the surface.” He commanded returning the smoke to his lips.

Again the Serpent understood, the gesture if not the words, doing nothing or reacting to Kid as he holstered his weapon and hobbled to the squad leader’s body. There, remembering all he could how Specs had treated the wounded, patched Lucky’s arm as best he could, gave him a boost of adrenalin to keep him conscious and tuck the severed limb into his armpit half scooped up the larger warrior off the ground. The two of them with three legs lurching as best they could past the Onyx warrior which still ignored them, letting them pass out into the hall and vanish along with Huds. Only then did it move, smashing a clenched claw-hand against its chest like a gong, letting the noise die away before speaking.

“Sar’Ur’Ion.” It howled then struck its fist against itself once more to press home the point.

“Master Sergeant Aphorious.” The army NCO replied taking one last puff on his cigarra before removing it, tossing it to the floor and grinding it away.” Let’s do this.”

III. You got the touch-Stan Bush

The Viper threw back its head in a roar of approval before diving to the ground avoiding the burst of plasma pulses the Sergeant had thrown at it, body a blur zigzagging across the ground to spring after him. Silver of its sword heralding its rising body, shooting through he after image of the Sergeant cutting through the remains of the door frame like it was tin then bent its body into an “U” shape avoiding the three round burst from the squatting Aphorious. Accepting his miss the human rolled away avoiding the heavy hilt which plunged through the floor panel, slivers of bulkhead spraying onto the Sergeant as he came to a rest back on his knees and rose in a run rushing past the beast. Its tail cracking up off the ground with the audible pop of cannon fire and hurtling towards him like a scythe blade, he and it colliding midstep neither slowing only to part in a visceral spray. Hot droplets shooting off the tail’s tip as it shot past, a hand width sliced from the end, curving about the Viper’s neck and head which tracked after the running human.

A claw-hand grabbing from his sword hand, still impaled through the flimsy floor, tearing his assault gun free which whirled around and fired in the same motion. A scarlet geyser the same shade as what dribbled from its tail erupting from Aphorious’s shoulder sending the Sergeant off trajectory tumbling over the dead hard against a bank of ruined consoles. Blood running down his arms the human struggled to rise, found his legs slacken and collapsed once more against the terminals. Hanging propped there while Sar’Ur’Ion wrestled his sword free and lowered his belly to the ground, a shadow of death which scurried along the ruby trail he’d left thrusting upwards to skewer the human. Seeing his face looking beneath the crook of his arm, seeing his smile, too late only able to watch with eyes long taught by the hard and cruel master that was war the Sergeant shove himself away from a stroke which should have split his spine asunder. Receiving the barest scratch to his abdomen instead which didn’t slow him up ending his rifle from beneath the curve of his arm and filling the space between them with plasma and ejecta. Fragments from the assault pistol, which took the brunt of the blast, impaling both warriors neither of which noticed in their bid to kill the other. Aphorious firing another bolt towards the beast’s midsection which it curved out of the way, along with the smoking ruins of its palm, and returned swinging the iron sword from the consol it had bisected.

No faltering, no hesitation from the pain. Inwardly the Sergeant saluted bringing in turn his cleaving blade blocking the blade, muscles in both his arms bulging on the impact. The Xeno blade biting deep into the metal, hammered into place over many long weeks and months by a skilled craftsman in a foundry on his birthworld it did not however yield. Stubbornly blunting the assault and derailing it forcing the Viper to rely on its raw bone strength to finish it across, strength which the Sergeant returned with all his might. Grunting with pain as he twisted his blade against the sword, feeling the slasher grin cut from him belly up into his side widen and his uniform grow heavier from the torrent which spilled from it. Heard his back crack, felt his arms burns in agony but with a particular venomous oath spun the blade away from him. His own weapon wrenched from his grasp, tearing blood and finger nails loose, and sent sailing past the Lizard which sunk after its sword stroke.

Bringing it in easy reach of Aphorious who rushed forward grabbing above and below the forearm clenching the great sword, digging his bloody stumped fingers into the rock hard flesh of the beast and with another Emperor forsaken curse and what felt like the splitting of his back inverted the alien’s limb joint with a wet snap. The sword falling from its grasp to the ground with a thud with belied its slight weight, the Sergeant leaning out to scoop it up when the back of the smoking claw-hand connected with him knocking him away and turning the bone in his arm to powder. Aphorious skidding over the slick ground, feeling more of himself slush out, recovering and rolling onto his belly avoiding a second brush with the bludgeon. The floor screaming out in protest as he pushed up on one arm, the other hanging useless, and fighting the shaking of the world around him plunged back towards the creature. Seeing the flicker of movement behind it too late, far too late to prevent it from lashing out, it’s bloody end through blunted breaking through his armor and ribcage. Feeling his body become inflamed in pain as it passed through, pushing up against his chest lifting him off the ground where they bicycled needlessly for a moment before he let them go limp. The energy needed elsewhere, needed to keep his visage steady as he looked the Viper in the eye, needed to keep his grip firm as he reached out with his hand grabbing the base of the tail and dragging himself forward. The rough skin of the beast scraping like sandpaper, emerging out his back caked in blood and flecks of other things, with every pull but each got him closer. Nearer to his target.

From behind he sensed it come, felt it crash like a wrecking ball into his back and felt it break like a twig but he did not cry out. Blood bubbling from his lips from his wounds and from his tongue cleaved apart by his clenched teeth he remained silent, focused on his task as with one final tug he released the tail and drove his bleeding fist like a missile down through the blaster wound scarred through the Viper’s chest. Plunging through that, through the pain, through death calling out for him to the beating organ within, finding its prunish flesh and encircling it and putting all that remained within him in crushing it.

Then…nothing. The two stared upon each other for those final, bitter moments where one sat bewitched between that of flesh and spirit. Longing for one but knowing deep in the reaches of one’s soul to being drawn inexorably towards the other. A time for bitterness, hatred or even forgiveness through which exactly either proffered reaching the cusp of their mortality neither combatant could guess. Perhaps merely a mark of respect, seeing in the others eyes the lifetime of slings and travesties of war, a kindred spirit soon departing.

“Sar’Ur’Ion.” Aphorious slurred starting it feeling himself slipping away, becoming more and more “there” rather than hanging “here”.

“Aphorious.” The Viper growled in return dipping its head through the cause could have been weakening muscles.

The two of them sharing in the exchange, whatever it might be, for those final fatal moments before they faded away leaving behind a pair of husks which would be uncovered by an army sweep team some time later. Through then separated both he and it would be cremated by the Imperial forces, one in mass the other singularly, destroyed by the flame by which they’d lived.

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Re: A NEW TERROR( STAR WARS CROSSOVER)

Post by Admiral Breetai » Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:48 pm

...my head it exploded from the awesome..I was yelling at my screen

"keep playing with the native kids and we'll never be done!!" this man needs to join The Rams Brawlers!!!

you outdid my entire story with this one other of god

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Re: A NEW TERROR( STAR WARS CROSSOVER)

Post by Praeothmin » Tue Feb 21, 2012 1:45 pm

Incredi-effing-ble!

I know, it's weird, but it fits...

I'm not sure about the last song though... :)

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Re: A NEW TERROR( STAR WARS CROSSOVER)

Post by sonofccn » Mon Feb 27, 2012 7:46 pm

A short update, a nice boring Talkie I'm afraid mostly between Krevin and Tyler, wrapping up my "Epic" Valor squad arc. Hope you enjoy.

“Ghaskull, the Butcher god, Iron lords…why can’t aliens ever worship Clyde the god of ice cream and naps?” Agent John interrupting a spiel from Professor Knobs(junior) on nonstandard organisms which had visited Earth down through the ages.

Commodore’s Log: Ground campaign is proceeding excellently casualties are well below the Krell standard, frontal lines are shattering while Donner’s forces piercing deep through enemy territory. Operations on the Judgment are proceeding smoothly as well, the extremely violent alien prisoner has been secured in a holding cell very far from the bridge with heavy stormtrooper guard.

Judgment, Bridge-

I.Boulevard of broken dreams-Green Day. Somehow I thought for both Krevin and Tyler it seemed fitting.

“No thank you.” Krevin said with feigned politeness rejecting Shanulas offer to refill the tea cup the Commander held.” I think I’ll do.”

Stomach sour on the churning mixture of stimulants and depressants, feeling drained from the lack of sleep he’d taken since their arrival in this virgin star system, he wanted nothing more than then to keep his peace. Drawing out time until the immediate air of “crisis” abated, the early gains he had so glibly recorded into the official record, whatever that became now in light of their current situation, united into a clear breakthrough in the twin flanks which had posed like pinchers to crush the Southern army. Then with the “moment” passed with the ground forces’ drives slowing to consolidate their gains and prepare themselves for command’s new battleplans, that is unless Donner acted like…Donner and tried to see how far he could push both his men and the enemy’s, Krevin could gracefully stand down to grab a rest period with minimal fear of hurting his delicately maintained image with the crew. Old fears of being too involved, too visible, of being linked to strongly with less than popular actions and edicts while not abated shrunken against the concern invisibility might cause the crew to forget from whom the chain of command ran down from.

A whisper-worry concern which had festered like the pit of his stomach, growing worse with the ever considerate and prompt service from Shanulas despite the mysterious of the universe still begging to be unlocked. The scholarly scientist had not totally lost his nerve or became subservient, he was quicker than ever to complain to Krevin or anyone else the military spec sensors on the Judgment were inadequate to truly capture the phenomenon, but friendly to his commanding officer. Shielding his more normal agitation and the Emperor knew what other plotting beneath an obliging veneer, a strange alteration of behavior which couldn’t help but set the Commodore’s teeth on edge.

Nor was it confined to the ship’s top scientist, stepping away from Shanulas before he could offer another cup of tea or worse try and explain what the anomaly “was” the monotone choir of the human drones working down in the crew pit fell away in expanding ripples at his passing. Hushed faces looking up from his passing shadow mute with wide eyes then delving to energetic but muffled discussion among their peers, not unlike how he imagined Lord Vader’s presence affected his underlings. Through he had never met the Dark Lord of the Sith, as opposed to a Light Lord of the Sith he speculated, he had watched many of the “Eye on the Galaxy” features on the Imperial news network back in his early lieutenant days and the Empire’s. Featuring many “reports” on the glorious protector leading the 501st against nefarious renegade Jedi determined to return to the suffocating Theocracy which had once covertly ruled over the former Republic or the Lord dispatching crowds of Megarachnids with but a wave of his hand. Odd solace coming to the Commodore as he recalled his youthful interest in the cybernetic warrior, at one time being drawn to the sacrifice and dedication it required to continue the Empire and Emperor after the flesh had failed, some germ or particle of those days he recalled with a serene calmness despite their hectic events seeping through the cracks of history to his burning soul. Taking him back further to his childish hero worship, of his life before the academy when combat was idealistic crusades and high honor, infecting him with the assuredness that had filled him so in those days.

And nearly got him killed a couple thousand times he thought with a sharp taste of bitterness offsetting the “cold water” drenching the fires of concern which engulfed his brain, outwardly of course his look of confidence never faded however stepping towards Tyler who rose up from the communication board and with a nod of his head directing Krebe to take his place greeted his superior officer.

“Anything new to report?” The Commodore asked matching the warmth the subcommander showed.” Donner report “he is heavily engaged with the enemy, has them on the ropes but needs additional assets to offset this minor rear flanking maneuver they are employing” yet?”

“Not yet , but I imagine it will be anytime now, things have been quiet for a change. No further bloodlusting neither fiends breaking their restraints, no new alien threats revealed.” Tyler laughed gesturing with a hand back to the com officer and his assistant who outwardly cringed and hunched lower against the blinking lights of the terminal.” The last shuttle carrying the engineering team has left for the capitol, surveillance of our robotic doctor reports it is proceeding with its work in the set up medical lab. All is good.”

“That’s just about when things feth up. Just like in that dive cantina on Apatros.” Krevin prompted with a disarming smile making a show of stepping around Tyler while they continued the discussion and very briefly acknowledged the two Imperial servants dutifully working the communication system.” What did they call it? Devil’s Dare?”

Wanting them to overhear along with the rest of the bridge crew of the excursion, a gentle nudge of the fallibility of the subcommander, the council group he’d formed in the Commodore’s absence not forgotten. Nor was its threat it posed unless it was properly assuaged.

“ I remember you had to promise the berth master a song to get them to make room for the Judgment…for seven weeks if I recall. All for a pretty face.” Tyler answered either in truth with the honey haze of remembrance or deflecting back onto the Commander.

“Two faces…they were twins and it was for three weeks.” Krevin launched back lifting away from the com board and holding up two fingers.

While far from civilized space the OuterRim Orework of course couldn’t have denied the Commodore when his taskforce jumped into the system sporting “battle scars” from a run in against a pirate fleet and their Lord’s moon fortress. Opening up a slip in the station immediately or risk having the planet Imperialized, its leaders hung and its employees forced into somehow even worse arrangement than the manner of one they currently were locked in. But the Judgment alone was huge, even with the customizable berths spun off from the Deepdock mobile shipyard required huge effort to properly size it and prevented of tens of dozens of freighters who’d normally be serviced to haul the cortosis out across the galaxy. Costing the Orework representative appointed to the planet millions in credits for each hour delayed, hastening the dockworkers ethos to repair the minor damage to the Star Destroyers and raising the price of each day extended quite heinously.

An Imperial deep space star-station positioned a few light-years closer to where they’d overtaken the Pirate Lord would have been cheaper and would have offered far better shore leave to the crew. But that wouldn’t have been home to the two blond angels whom had been an unexpected bonus among the gold and platinum in the Lord’s vault the stormtroopers had landed to raid. Karen and Katherine, found among the effects of the late pirate as trophies taken from some star-cruise or transport in a raid, the girls were never quite clear on the particulars only that they return to the mining world of Aportas. Certain theories were discussed between Krevin and Tyler alongside saurian brandy with the leading one being the two had deliberately went away on one of the pirate ships when it had bartered for a resupply in order to see the galaxy.

Not that it mattered, they were treated as honored guests on the trip back to their world and in short order had become quite smitten to the Commodore leading to their extended stay over and a tour of the “sights” and regrettably the Devil’s Dare.

“She looked like a Twi’lek dancer.” The Subcommander said in his defense outwardly at least more bashful about the experience than anything else.” Moved like one too…not that you’d have noticed.”

“I saw when you went upstairs with her…to discuss the philosophical underpinnings of the New Order I trust. As was I deeply attentive that the former captives we rescued did not have any lingering psychological effects from their mistreatment.” Krevin, enjoying himself, furthered the memories flooding back to him.

The harsh, grating lighting which didn’t so much illuminate the smoke filled dive as sheath the moldy coverings in shifting Technicolor strobes, the repetitive music blaring from ratty loudspeakers in the corner, the lumpy seat cushions presumably designed for races who’d evolved without posteriors, cracked durasteel table with flagons stacked foaming over with the dark pitch brew which had been the only thing they’d served. Stronger than he preferred, hard enough to kick back a Wookiee, but the girls had seemed to liked it. Karen had mentioned the pirate scoundrel Krom had been fond of the mixture, through whether as an intoxicant or engine fuel she hadn’t specified being “silenced” by a look from Katherine.

Things had been going well, the twins responding marvelously…to his deeply concerned analyses of their psyche, feeling like a champ with the galaxy at his heels then it happened. A scream, the Commodore recalled feeling a touch of his enjoyment fade at the distant event, which marked the transition from receptive vice den to a sordid sepulcher.

“At least yours didn’t try and bite you, honest to the Emperor her jaw unhinged.” The Subcommander, laughing now that the memory was long and dead, rebuked motioning with his hand what he meant.” Fething almost broke my back when she knocked me against the bed, not that my chest felt any better with what felt like a Wookiee pressing down on it. If I still hadn’t had my stern with me…if they weren’t made out such cheap plastic resin that shattered…her scream…when I plunged the shard into her…was likely the second worst sound I have ever heard.”

“I know.” Krevin agreed with a shiver, unaware how lucky he was not to have the war cry of a Sith battledroid to compare it too.

“Thought those rooms were supposed to be sound proof.” Tyler fired back with mock astonishment.” So no one can hear you discuss philosophy.”

“They are but when you slit your green skin animal woman the entire staff and half the patrons joined in with her.” The Commodore remembered, suddenly feeling like another drink and with his Subcommander following in stride returning to Shanulas’s station.” Near as I can figure they were linked by telepathy. Could feel each other pain or something.”

Hearing this the Judgment’s science officer looked up from his Scandocs, digital textbooks on what Imperial Science believed it understood about the universe and up to the minute scans of the anomaly his interest piqued. While his interest were firmly in the “harder” mediums like physics he’d before his exile to the Outer Rim had participated in large thought experiments with cadre of other scientists on hypotheses discoveries and inventions. Frequently taking an idea from a science-fantasy and taking it to its logical conclusion and analyses by the scientific method such as when they had spent a full week on a device capable of dissembling one’s molecular structure and reconfiguring it at a separate location.

“Telepathy? From a Twi’lek?” He asked while holding the kettle out to pour.” Mutation or could it have been artificially produced? A colleague of mine once theorized that with the recent advances in droid related technology and the miniaturization and increased reliability of cordless data connectors pseudo-telepathy could be achieved through machinery. That one could link to a central database and exchange knowledge to and from your mind like we trade Scandocs today.”

“No, we encountered a group of rogue Jedi.” Tyler corrected in such a cold manner even Shanulas knew not to broach the subject further.” Aliens naturally have an affinity for the perverse powers of the Force, allowing one to share feelings, emotions even thoughts. Which is how they so effectively ruined the Republic and why they are such a threat.”

“Presumed Jedi, there wasn’t much for the Security Bureau to recover afterwards and I don’t think she had gave you much chance for a deep inspection when I came in on you.” Krevin added tweaking his Subcommander just so.” Not that the Jedi haven’t sowed more than their destruction, corrupting the Republic, causing the Clone wars to further their hold on power…but they all weren’t like that…I mean a few…”

“Take it you were one to have a favorite Jedi during the War?” Tyler inquired without hint of stigma.

The practice falling into disfavor and down the memory hole following but once small boys, and not so small boys, had bandied about the learning crèche arguing if Mace Windu could take Yoda in a fight, if Kate Fisto had failed his former apprentice Nahdar Vebb or vice versa etc. The fascination so strong there’d even been an animated Jedi Adventure show chronicling fumaginative renditions of their exploits during the War. Similar to the military approved Stormtrooper Missions which aired weekly on the holonet.

“Didn’t you?” Krevin asked just a hint sheepish taking his beverage from Shanulas, who rolled his eyes at the juvenile practice.” What can I say I thought Skywalker was bad arse, I kinda looked to him as a guiding example when I enrolled in the academy for strength and virtue. What can I say, I was seventeen, I was an idiot.”

“Oh I had the Skywalker action figure when I was kid, about the only one who of them who didn’t come off as a pompous weasel on the holo recordings.” Tyler allowed letting an iota of genuine regret cloud his features.” A pity Obiwan killed him for removing the Separatist’s leadership, ending the war and revealing the Jedi’s mad scheme.

Raising his glass to his lips the Commodore nodded, lost in the warm glow of that simpler time, stepping out of the path of Tyler as he beckoned for a serving from the Shanulas as well. The Science officer grudgingly complying after scrounging up a plastic cup from somewhere in the confines of his terminal, the faint reeking of oil and electrical wire cut with the steaming brew he poured for the superior officer. Grumbling not so quietly under his breath about the Subcommander abusing his generosity all the while.

“Sirs?” Krebe called out cautiously dragging both men’s attention to his shirking form.” We’ve received word, the alien prisoner has regained consciousness.”

“Excellent.” Krevin beamed walking towards them, Tyler following grimacing slightly both at the taste of the tea and the weaker than he preferred brandy mixed with it.”Have them began at once.”

“Yes sir.” Krebe responded, cringing and slinking behind the Com officer away from Tyler’s stern and exacting gaze.” It will be done.”

Judgment, Brig-

H’urq had awakened from his crimson dreams confined once more, his arms and legs manacled and shackled to the slick, cold surface of steel, the sterile reek in the air informing him he was still trapped aboard one of their chariots. Too dry and stinking of the artificial, the unnatural. The scent of prey, of the weak. Those whose blood smelled so sweetly, whose flesh parted exquisitely. He’d found himself among them when he awoken the first time, trapped aboard the smaller chariot, sensing its movements through the shudders of its deck plate. Then he’d hoped it was taking him to a world, fresh and sweet with life where he could run and slaughter. Like now he’d waited, feigning stillness waiting, listening. Learning his preys’ numbers, their position. And when he’d smelled circulated air instead of fresh breeze, cold lighting instead of a warm day’s glare he had eliminated them. A soft growl rumbling through the hybrid’s throat at the memory of the white armored prey, their brittle shells serving only to encumber them in the short fight.

He also remembered the Other, whose skin was slick with fear like he was prey. The overpowering scent masking the predator, luring H’urq unsuspectingly into his web. Evading with motions rivaling his own and bringing the stinging chalice of fire-water down upon the hyrbid’s skull, blinding his eyes in searing pain. H’urq snorted at that, sounding more like a rattled cough, and of the first disorientating wave which fell over him as he’d pawed away the boiling fluid. The first of many numbing rings, spying through blood shot orbs the Other meters away a weapon now in his hands, which had sounded his capture again. A second humiliation, bring brought low still alive, one he fought to avenge premeditatedly. Pushing muscles which wanted to turn to jelly, fighting to remained balanced, he’d pushed ahead outstretching a hand to sink through the Other’s soft flesh. To pull bits and pieces out of him, to hear his scream before the darkness claimed him once more but it was not to be. H’urq had fumbled, sagged to the metallic floor his last sight before the ethereal gates closed over him that of the Other continuing his bombardment of stunning rings. Hammering home his victory over the hybrid and the heinous slight that he would awake once more in their captor, a prisoner. A plaything like he was prey.

And so it was, for the moment. Hanging suspended, body limp, listening to the soft circulation of their fetid air, to the slight creak of the deckplate settling, and for the longed for noise of the door opening. Aching to hear the sounds of preys’ hearts beating, the echo of their footfalls as they approached, his head and jaws not restrained. An error he swore he’d make them pay for and rekindle some of the dreams of crimson that enchanted his unconsciousness.

Dwelling on those ruby reveries to pass the slow crawl of his imprisonment, through pale and flavorless compared to the actual deed, when the voice spoke to him. Soft and feminine, abrupt and without warning. So close, almost touching H’urq found snapping open his eyes and lunging with teeth bared stopping a fraction of a millimeter from the unresponsive flickering blue spirit. Nostrils drinking deeply the air around the translucent female smelling naught but the clinical air, listening to no pounding of an organ within her chest propelling no sweet ambrosia blood through her veins. No gentle flesh to caress beneath his talons…she was simulacrum like the metal man of wires and gears. Fake not real, useless. Spitting the word as a curse to her smiling face along with a glob of phlegm which sailed silently through her, the false-girl reaching down to her feet and picking of a spherical object made of rubber. Holding it out towards him she spoke again.

“Ball.” She cooed meaninglessly gesturing to the orb.” Ball.”

“Be gone fleshless specter!” H’urq cursed coarsely swinging his head side to side looking for someone, anyone to the focus of his rage.” Show yourself! Or are you spine-jellied you hide behind illusions of frail maidens!”

“That is incorrect.” She answered sweetly in the same incomprehensible tongue.” Ball.”

H’urq cursed her again, gesturing with one hand every sign he could remember to show his displeasure, shrieking everything he would do to her if he every found her flesh and body vassal only to be interrupted by his bonds surging with current. His body arching from the wall, back popping, his jaws outstretching in a wordless scream that had died in his constricted throat. Then, at the discretion of the medical droid closely monitoring the vitals of his patient, the circuit was disconnected and H’urq was allowed to collapse, gasping for breath for several moments before the cloudy veil of his misery was pierced by the woman’s soft, soothing voice.

“Ball.” She continued prodding the hybrid, dim understanding taking root.” Ball.”

“Baaaaaaallllll.” It croaked, body tensing for another surge only to be relieved when nothing happened.

“Good.” The phantom said, smile growing wider, in lieu of approval.

The ball in her hand changing, its shimmering blue hue turning to the faded color of blood which she once again basked for the hybrid.

“Red. Red ball.” She instructed, repeating it after the alien’s insulting tirade ended with an electrical hiss, continuing the intricate lesson plan laid out for the beast.

New Hope, Stout- Fortification- That-Shall-Endure-

The surface was alive when Jek stumbled out of the charnel drenched bunker Lucky hanging on his side and Huds up ahead screaming for a Corpsman among the chaos, everywhere motion and movement. Soldiers rushing about on the bunker’s edge dragging bodies away, clearing away alien emplacements replacing them with their own, making camp. The horizon sprawling with flickering torch like lights as squads moved through clearing the remaining nest lighting flares to coordinate artillery fire or with the patrols screening the caravan of transports and tanks which careened through the fortification, forged by specific demolition charges through their earthen works, past the bunker on their way like a dagger to the enemy’s heartland. Above more lights twinkled beneath the brooding clouds from the circling LAATs, some landing disgorging fresh soldiers others dropping crates or light tanks helping to secure the fledgling Imperial command point. Ones of dozens being set up to better coordinate the reserve forces which would entrench the gains the forward spear tips were raking in or at catalog the destruction being wrought for further analyze and doctrine review.

So much movement, all around, it made Kid’s head spin. The entire world becoming like a noxious ride as he and Lucky slowed and crumpled against the bunker’s wall. Feeling the sopping front of his uniform shift beneath his palm as he slide down the side, hand a vivid crimson when he pulled it off of his equally tarnished front. Dripping, scarlet rain, where he held it locked in contemplation fighting for it’s meaning through a sea sick mind draped in fog. The outer world motions blurring together, becoming one long continuous image of incoherency. The stormtroopers their armor partially undone relieving themselves over the corpses of Vipers, the officer with the eggshell cracked helmet and new bloody leather pelt wrapped over one shoulder shouting orders, the LAAT sinking down from the heavens kicking up dirt as it settled in, the cursing soldiers setting up anti-air laser cannons and mortar pits. One giant image, a jumbled holo-vid, continuing with out end.

Placing his blood red palm onto Lucky’s shoulder he shook the squad leader, cajoling him to remain conscious, not sure way anymore. He knew it was important, the creeping fog hadn’t stolen that from him, desperately important he keep him talking even as he found himself slumping against the sharp shooter’s body. Hand sliding uselessly to the ground where it lay, oozing ruby tears, until an outside force gripped him and pulled him aside. The night becoming day, a blinding light which split apart the darkness swishing after each direction his eyes fled to trying to escape its wrath.

“This one still responsive.” A voice said, some shadow beyond the glare, as Jek felt Lucky’s hand he’d carried pulled out from under his arm.” Hmm…I think this belongs to yours. Think it can be reattached?”

“Maybe…right now I’m more worried keeping him alive. Sweet Emperor check his med-scan…” Another voice said beyond Jek’s shrinking field of vision.”…all I can do here is better patch up his severed limb, tranq yours and prep him for transport to a MASH site.”

“Will do.” The first voice said, ignoring Kid’s mewling argument, the light vanishing and his shadow bending into the Corporal’s vision which he tried to bat away.” Little guy still has some fight in him, going to be the death of him if he isn’t careful.”

“I don’t care if he thinks he is the Emperor, bind his lacerations and get him aboard that transport.” The second voice scolded as Jek felt something press into his neck and heard a hiss, thoughts of Vipers causing his body to shudder in revulsion.” If those meatball surgeons lose anymore soldiers it won’t be because of one of my medics understand?”

“Absolutely.” The first voice answered smugly as Kid hovered between the darkness and the world.

His last thought before fading away was if it had seemed the same to Gunny in the dead forest. Something to ask when he woke up…

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Praeothmin wrote:I'm not sure about the last song though... :)
Well what can I say? I like it and have been waiting for an excuse to use since Breetia suggested it. :)
Admiral Breetai wrote:...my head it exploded from the awesome..I was yelling at my screen
Thank you and I hope you had duct tape on hand to put it back togather.
Praeothmin wrote:Incredi-effing-ble!
Thank you.
Admiral Breetai wrote:you seem to have planned this out in advance no?
I wouldn't say planned, which gives way to much credit to my seat of the pants style, at best I have a rough outline of what I want which constantly updates and changes as things happen.

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Re: A NEW TERROR( STAR WARS CROSSOVER)

Post by Admiral Breetai » Mon Feb 27, 2012 11:49 pm

Anakin skywalker action figures huh? That's interesting

i liked this chapter and the shout out to Conan's god

red ball indeed good lord poor bastard

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Re: A NEW TERROR( STAR WARS CROSSOVER)

Post by sonofccn » Tue Feb 28, 2012 4:19 am

“Once introduced the contagion introduces increased vascular pump action, heavy perspiration, fever and swelling of the cranial lobes which frequently caused the exhibition of delusional state. From infection to clinical death takes from six hours to no more than nine hours with a massive hormonal and enzyme “burst”. It is from this the alterations of metabolism and mutation is fueled by, continuing to enlarge segments of the subject’s brain responsible for basic motor functions or generating the cancerous tumor which typically forms beneath the ribcages and festoons into the stomach linning. In post ten hours post mortem the subject will reanimate with…a crude approximation of life attacking those around it to either spread the infection or consume chunks of raw flesh which with metastasize into the enlarging growth. Post fifteen to post twenty hours post mortem tumor will dissolve it cell membrane anchoring it to its host and proceed emerge from emaciated husk becoming an independent and self-sustained organism carrying the infection to begin the cycle anew.” Doctor Herbert explaining his and senior doctor Neville findings with the outbreak in S. America.

I.Behind Blue Eyes-The Who
The shuttle Traba Mortis plied through the inky darkness of the void, interior dimly lit by the humming consoles reflecting off of the dark hued coverings of the pilot droid dutifully working the controls. The actual illuminators dosed so as not to disturb the ship’s sole organic passenger seated beside the robot leaning back in the stiff chair his boots resting against the terminal in front of him. The brim of his wide hat pulled down over his eyes, a death stick unlit in one hand which he rolled back and forth over the back of his fingers. Over and over again back and forth listening to the sounds of the shuttle running, the clicking of the droid as it piloted the Mortis towards the Judgment, of the desolate tomb of durasteel and thrusters move about.

The man in black listening to the stillness, the calmness which never lasted, which he found himself for spell saturated in. The noted absence of the nervous chatter of the CompForce which had once filled the metallic walls, the stomping of their feet on the deckplate, all gone. Scattered to the cosmic winds never to return, a small loss by any measure serving their masters far better than they otherwise could have. They wouldn’t have seen it that way of course, if now given voice they’d choke out from beneath the heavy crushing sod of death of the promise of solidarity, of the ethos of the New Order. They’d rightly proclaim the travesty of their arrangement, no doubt the one he’d wedged a blaster against his temple most strenuously of all.

No matter. There was a lot of that going around. Clenching his fingers around the death stick he brought it to the cradle of his mouth and without looking brought forth an igniter from a pocket in his long coat and singed the end. Inhaling deeply the intoxicating fumes as he thumbed off the ignition source and pocketed it, hand returning with a gold coin by which he resumed the finger exercise. Its polished surface catching the light, glimmering like starlight as it fumbled across the breadth of his hand. Those enduring celestial bodies, overwatchers of all who swam within their inky domain and sought to proclaim their mastery.

The tender minted with the relief on one side and personal inscription on the other of Barodos the anvil, minor tyrant of a minor kingdom on an anemic continent on a smallish world more than ten thousands years previously. Most notable for supposedly taking the precious metals his coinage was pressed from out of his victims teeth, while clearly an exaggeration based simply on plain economics it did presumably illustrate the warlord’s grasp and outlook of life. Passing beneath the boots of history, as all must eventually, the twinkling coin had wandered through the galaxy from owner to owner until found by an elderly grandfather like industrialist in the hands of a half starved youth pawing it out of a raingutter oblivious to its true value beyond hope of trading it for some gruel like porridge. Taking pity, perhaps rekindling beret of his own childless existence, the elder gentleman took the youth as his ward. Clothed him, fed him, shared with him his love and abiding interest in his collection of coins the galaxy over, schooled him the running of his factories, preening him to one day assume his role. For six months the youth listened and when he had learned enough Jack slit the man’s throat open behind his desk with a letter opener but not before transmitting the various names and contacts through which he’d supplied war elements to the Separatists. His first experience with death, the man in black had simply stared after the deed was finished, watching the blood leak down the serrated neck as if trying to puzzle out what he did or discover some deeper meaning to the brief, violent action. Afterwards he set the bloody opener down on the man’s desk and carefully removed the coin of Barodos from its protective place there pocketing it as a keepsake from the experience.

Always hearing in the mocking tones of the tyrant emblazoned on the gold’s surface the haunting query of who would wield it when it was his blood staining the ground, who would hold it then and marvel at its unblemished and flawless demeanor?

“This is shuttle Traba Mortis requesting docking permission to hanger two, do you read me Judgment?” His droid pilot asked breaking the silence, flawlessly imitating the voice of a flesh and blood human.

“Confirm Traba Mortis…” The on duty technician responded a moment later confirming a shuttle listed being deployed in support of the fighting on his screens.”…hanger 2? Can you confirm? Place’s a graveyard everyone there got pulled for “special projects”.”

“Fitting.” The droid replied with the right hint of annoyance and boredom in its simulated tone.” This is a plague ship, Vipers dosed some stormtroopers with a nasty bio-agent, medical is shipping specimens up for study.”

“Feth, what General’s daughter did you get caught with?” The technician asked with a laugh.” Clearance granted, proceed and good luck.”

“Thanks, I’ll need it.” The android replied shunting off the link, shuttle curving alongside the far larger ship towards the second hanger.

Rotating his metallic, dark polished head towards the man in black the machine’s eyes blinked in anticipation as it asked in its normal electronic voice its master’s approval of its performance. The thespian software he’d installed into it had been high end but with it none the less came certain quirks like the one now.

“ It doesn’t matter.” He answered flicking the coin into the air, catching it, sticking it into his pocket and removing his death stick to exhale.” Five after landing your short term memory will be wiped. We were never here.”

“ As always.” The robot sighed forced into compliance due to certain other algorithms running alongside its primary program.” But I find the arrangement most unequitable.”

“Yes.” Jack allowed returning his death stick for another puff.” There is a lot of that going around.”

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