SW Reactor and Power Page
Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 10:03 pm
http://www.st-v-sw.net/STSWimpower.html
Looking for reviews/editing help/comments. This is the result of me finding a pretty old page, thinking I could polish it up and tie up a few loose ends, and have done with it.
The way it actually turned out was that very little of the page is the original content, none of the original content is in the same place, and the whole thing's basically been re-written, re-edited, re-done, revised, reworked, recalculated time and again, and of course repaired because Kompozer is a little flaky with some things.
It's taken days upon days. And I don't even know how long I spent on the original years ago, but there was a lot in the original page, too. Now it's this humungaloid monstrosity covering everything from fusion to ion engines to ship's power distribution and even some speculations on possible ISD fuel range.
In short, it ended up a fairly comprehensive look, and while I like being comprehensive this is just ridiculous.
I'm basically tired of looking at it at this point, to be honest. I'm really quite exhaustipated. But before I completely release it, I figured I'd let you guys take a crack at it and see if I have any glaring errors, abnormal conclusions, or just completely weird non sequiturs. Hopefully anything found is simply the result of incessant editing, but if there's something that just breaks logic I hope you see it, because at present whenever I look at this page my brain glazes over (not just my eyes).
Thank you in advance for your time.
Looking for reviews/editing help/comments. This is the result of me finding a pretty old page, thinking I could polish it up and tie up a few loose ends, and have done with it.
The way it actually turned out was that very little of the page is the original content, none of the original content is in the same place, and the whole thing's basically been re-written, re-edited, re-done, revised, reworked, recalculated time and again, and of course repaired because Kompozer is a little flaky with some things.
It's taken days upon days. And I don't even know how long I spent on the original years ago, but there was a lot in the original page, too. Now it's this humungaloid monstrosity covering everything from fusion to ion engines to ship's power distribution and even some speculations on possible ISD fuel range.
In short, it ended up a fairly comprehensive look, and while I like being comprehensive this is just ridiculous.
I'm basically tired of looking at it at this point, to be honest. I'm really quite exhaustipated. But before I completely release it, I figured I'd let you guys take a crack at it and see if I have any glaring errors, abnormal conclusions, or just completely weird non sequiturs. Hopefully anything found is simply the result of incessant editing, but if there's something that just breaks logic I hope you see it, because at present whenever I look at this page my brain glazes over (not just my eyes).
Thank you in advance for your time.