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Orange Star vs Borg Cube (ATTENTION EVERYONE)

Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 9:17 pm
by Youngla0450
Hello, everyone. You do remember the Orange Star, right? The link to it is http://imagine.wikia.com/wiki/Orange_Star. Now, please read the article before posting your thoughts here. Who would win: the Orange Star or a Borg Cube?

Re: Orange Star vs Borg Cube (ATTENTION EVERYONE)

Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 9:20 pm
by Mike DiCenso
Please remember to put your story related topics in the appropriate forum.
-Mike

Re: Orange Star vs Borg Cube (ATTENTION EVERYONE)

Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 9:21 pm
by Youngla0450
Mike DiCenso wrote:Please remember to put your story related topics in the appropriate forum.
-Mike
Mr. Dicenso, the only reason I am posting this here is because it attracts more attention. Posting it in the stories forum would leave it idle for hours, or even days, weeks, months, or years!

Re: Orange Star vs Borg Cube (ATTENTION EVERYONE)

Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2010 12:52 am
by The Dude
Theres a lesson there, should you care to learn it.

Re: Orange Star vs Borg Cube (ATTENTION EVERYONE)

Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2010 1:43 am
by Mr. Oragahn
Youngla0450 wrote:
Mike DiCenso wrote:Please remember to put your story related topics in the appropriate forum.
-Mike
Mr. Dicenso, the only reason I am posting this here is because it attracts more attention. Posting it in the stories forum would leave it idle for hours, or even days, weeks, months, or years!
Irrelevant. You've already been told to post your stories in the appropriate place, and you ignored this advisory.

Re: Orange Star vs Borg Cube (ATTENTION EVERYONE)

Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2010 3:38 am
by Mike DiCenso
I'll be frank, Youngla. No offense, but It would seem that most people here are not terribly interested in the so-called stories you're writing as it is nothing more than wet-dream wankfest material, or copies almost directly from Wong's mediocre fanfic story. That's why your stuff isn't getting the attention you'd like. :-/
-Mike

Re: Orange Star vs Borg Cube (ATTENTION EVERYONE)

Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 12:08 am
by Youngla0450
My stuff is not wankfest, Mr. Dicenso! I am trying to be as kind and respectful as I can, and yet everyone disses me. I just ask for advice and opinions.

Re: Orange Star vs Borg Cube (ATTENTION EVERYONE)

Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 12:45 am
by Mike DiCenso
Then what would you call a "story" about a super-perfect, all-powerful Death Star, if not a wankfest?
-Mike

Re: Orange Star vs Borg Cube (ATTENTION EVERYONE)

Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 1:05 am
by Mr. Oragahn
Youngla0450 wrote:My stuff is not wankfest, Mr. Dicenso! I am trying to be as kind and respectful as I can, and yet everyone disses me. I just ask for advice and opinions.
By coming to such an obscure forum as ours, instead of TFN? Who are you kidding?

Re: Orange Star vs Borg Cube (ATTENTION EVERYONE)

Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 2:22 am
by Youngla0450
Can at least one person give a detailed and through review on my Orange Star?

Re: Orange Star vs Borg Cube (ATTENTION EVERYONE)

Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 3:10 am
by Mr. Oragahn
Youngla0450 wrote:Can at least one person give a detailed and through review on my Orange Star?
No, no one seems to care about your fan fiction. Try some place else.

EDIT: happiness.

Re: Orange Star vs Borg Cube (ATTENTION EVERYONE)

Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 3:28 am
by Mike DiCenso
Hey easy there, Oragahn. It's not worth getting banned again over this one.
-Mike

Re: Orange Star vs Borg Cube (ATTENTION EVERYONE)

Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 3:40 am
by Mike DiCenso
Youngla0450 wrote:Can at least one person give a detailed and through review on my Orange Star?
I'm trying to be nice here, Youngla. What you have written is not a story, it is just a bunch of wanked up wishfullfillment statistics combined with a bunch of cut-and-paste material from off various sites, like Wookiepedia, and SDN. In short, there is nothing to really comment on at all here.
-Mike

Re: Orange Star vs Borg Cube (ATTENTION EVERYONE)

Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 4:54 am
by Youngla0450
Ok then. I give up. Anyways, soon I will get to work on a detailed story. Empire conquering Federation.

Re: Orange Star vs Borg Cube (ATTENTION EVERYONE)

Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 5:34 am
by Mike DiCenso
Have fun and good luck, but don't be too terribly suprised or put out when no one shows any enthusiasm for it.
-Mike