Excellent Story of Empire conquering Federation

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Youngla0450
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Excellent Story of Empire conquering Federation

Post by Youngla0450 » Sun Jul 11, 2010 1:42 am

This is the PDF format of a excellent story, linked here:
http://www.stardestroyer.net/Empire/Fan ... nquest.pdf

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Re: Excellent Story of Empire conquering Federation

Post by Mr. Oragahn » Sun Jul 11, 2010 3:00 am

Youngla0450 wrote:This is the PDF format of a excellent story, linked here:
http://www.stardestroyer.net/Empire/Fan ... nquest.pdf
Trying to redeem yourself?
Seriously, go troll somewhere else.

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Re: Excellent Story of Empire conquering Federation

Post by Mike DiCenso » Sun Jul 11, 2010 5:47 pm

Conquest is nothing new, and it is a medicore piece of fanwank. It's been given some fairly in-depth reviews here at SFJN, particularly in this thread.
-Mike

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Re: Excellent Story of Empire conquering Federation

Post by Youngla0450 » Sun Jul 11, 2010 5:49 pm

Mike DiCenso wrote:Conquest is nothing new, and it is a medicore piece of fanwank. It's been given some fairly in-depth reviews here at SFJN, particularly in this thread.
-Mike

Thank you for the link Mr. DiCenso. Anyways, will somebody comment on my story, posted at "Something Important (PLEASE READ)" in the forum "Stories and Roleplaying".

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Re: Excellent Story of Empire conquering Federation

Post by Youngla0450 » Sun Jul 11, 2010 6:16 pm

I would like to know if anybody will comment on the story. In my opinion, it has great detail, good organization, and good flow.

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