Don't come in here posting rude comments. Also, you must be the user Norade over at SDN!
That's absolutely hilarious. No, I'm afraid I'm not Norade, though I loved his editing of your story. First off, I've been around since the days of the ST-v-SW forum as an active participant in this debate, and I briefly browsed SD.net and various other forums years ago. You may even remember that you of all people finally caused me to register at SD.net finally just to post how disrespectful you were being.
But I don't expect to actually convince you. I do expect to continue to tell you how your stories are sub-par.
Also, it's not being rude when it's the truth.
But I will tell you what is simple conjuncture, I believe you are a child who has no concept of what you're doing and are now hiding behind the mask of a troll because to actually admit what you are would be worse. You're enjoying the anonymity of the internet to hide your poor writing behind a veil of 'intent of ignorance' and you're actually taking this really personal and simply are able to take a deep breath long enough to not completely disregard our rules.
I believe that you think you're having fun, but deep down you feel highly shunned, and I believe that you are even more upset that absolutely no one will help you or join your side for any reason. You're not liked by anyone here as more than a passing amusement in these debates, and will most likely be quickly forgotten once you're gone, your stories left unread.
I then suspect in four years time you will re-seek out these forums and once again seek to legitimately apologize in the hopes of 'mending bridges.' It will then fail miserably. That last part I know too well.. I used to be a troll on the internet for shits.. That was a decade ago...
You see, I know your type... I hung out with trolls of all shapes and sizes.... I dealt with the 'me toos' and the impostors... And I dealt with your kind.. insecure and frail even in the anonymity of the internet.
The last part of my oppinion is you are a poor writer who has had little comparison. I used to believe I was, "the shit" at video games till I went to my first tournament, I believe you really believe in your writing style but you're not actually looking for criticism...
You're looking for someone to validate the time you spent on those works by simply praising you blindly, while also doing more work for you...
Again, this is my opinion of you. I don't really care any opinion you have of me, and frankly no one else does either. Welcome to the internet. Enjoy your stay.
Have a good day Young... If you can.