I haven't been on for months, but I am back, and I hate what you said about my article.Mith wrote:I consider it a crude, but efficient method of instruction of the really, really bad. As for editing, I'm not sure. It goes downhill from there. Towards the end it's almost impossible to understand without a flow chart.
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After reading your fan fic or whatever it is you call it i can honestly say id rather have a afternoon of rectal surgery than read another.Youngla0450 wrote:I haven't been on for months, but I am back, and I hate what you said about my article.Mith wrote:I consider it a crude, but efficient method of instruction of the really, really bad. As for editing, I'm not sure. It goes downhill from there. Towards the end it's almost impossible to understand without a flow chart.
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All right there, Kor. Ease up a bit there. And Youngla, clam down as well. People have a right not to like something you've written, drawn, or said. It's their right, as long as they keep the criticism reasonably constructive.
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